it takes me time to feel removed enough from something I have written to see it perhaps as others see it. I happened across this one today and a newfound appreciation for it.

A dream’s a thing of fancy
A heart demands the truth
To divine your heart, my dear
It should not take a sleuth.
A heart like mine is open
And ready to receive
An equal in proportion…
Though I’m a bit naive.
But you wear a mask, my dear,
I cannot see behind.
Why would you keep things from me?
It’s Fate, for sure—I’d find.
I’d find out that I quit, my dear,
And you behind my back
Continued smoking normally
And didn’t tell me jack.
Of course I would be mad, you know,
A violation of
The trust that I put into you
A rupture of our love.
And on these grounds we’ll never be
Compatible as one.
You live a life sep’rate from this,
And thus our love’s undone.
It should not take a genius
To divine why I’m mad.
Still, your leaving’s broken me
I’ve never been…
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