So I wrote a sonnet. What do you think of it? Good? Bad? Neither?

We all are waves upon the same great sea.
And all of us were sent here with a goal.
We might not yet perceive what it might be.
But this is all well-known to all our souls.

I try to remind myself of this when times get
So hard I wonder how I might go on.
Everyone was put here for a reason.
And I don’t reckon mine has yet to dawn.

So I must keep it moving. Keep growing.
As long as I make progress every day
Eventually I will end up with God.
And live a life of bliss in every way.

It’s important to have goals even if hard.
Or else success just isn’t in the cards.

2 responses to “Read This Sonnet”

  1. Awesome sonnet you are amazing thanks buddy keep up the good work.

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  2. I appreciate it, my brother. I have written much better sonnets! If you search sonnet on my site, there are a plethora of them to read. I’ve been very inspired by Jones Very lately who I discovered digging into Thoreau and Emerson. It struck me that he was so fond of the Shakespearean style of sonnet, when I had been for so many years. And this man was ENLIGHTENED. He was Shakespeare’s superior. I posted a few of his sonnets on here too I think you’d enjoy. I really appreciate you reading. All my love.

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